I have decided to write my piece
about John Keats. This is because his short stay in Winchester (12th August 1819 – 3rd October 1819) is a significant period
of his life, which is detailed by historians and Keats’ own letters. Will
Adams, although having an interesting story, is not as well documented. This makes engaging the reader more challenging since, as highlighted by Theodore A. Rees Cheney in Writing Creative Nonfiction, “the mentioning of concrete, realistic details about life
raises emotions in the reader.” Without these, the story of Will Adams cannot be made to suit the creative nonfiction form.
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| Selected Poems & Letters of Keats, by Robert Gittings One of the many reference books now collected on my desk. |
With the decision made, I began my
initial research by studying Keats himself, primarily through reading the letters he wrote during his stay in Winchester. Through his own
perspective, I could gain a stronger sense of who he was as a person, how his
stay in Winchester affected him, and what he did while he was there. These will
be essential when developing the characterisation and plot for my piece.
During this research, I discovered
that Keats took a regular walk in Winchester, from the front of Winchester
Cathedral to St Cross Hospital. This walk, on one autumn day in September,
inspired him to write the famous ode, To Autumn.
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| To Autumn - Read by Ben Whishaw https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwn6Xaz_uLM |
This has the potential to be an
interesting basis for a narrative, as it has the concrete details necessary for
a scene, with wider significance for the
reader. This builds upon an idea in creative nonfiction known as the Ladder of
Abstraction, where small actions showcase wider, abstract concepts for the reader to consider. I aim to replicate this in my piece, as achieving this makes for effective nonfiction.
As I read his letters, however, I became aware of other characters, such as Fanny Brawne - his lover and
obsession at the time - and Charles Brown, who accompanied Keats to Winchester. Finding more information about them, as well as
more information about the walk, is crucial to discover more scenes
for the piece, and aids in portraying the dramatized events accurately.
This follows Lee Gutkind’s view of the nonfiction writer’s role: “Nonfiction
writers cannot alter the facts, but they can capture…them much more
dramatically.”


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